Where is a good editor when you need one? Truthfully I’m not exactly sure what an editor does but with a very small amount of changes this would go from a great book to an excellent one.
-And finally, if the books follows the same rhyming pattern the whole way through why do you mess it up on the last page?!?!
stuck-hen — WHAT?!!?
Those problems aside this book has a great chanty, jaunty, rhymey, rhythmy, flow to it (that’s a technical term).
I like the pictures (other than above mentioned problems) and Ivy likes it enough we’ve been reading it multiple times in a row.
So even with the above problems…
Would I recommend it? Yes, unless you are one who reads books in a flat monotone, this requires that chanty, jaunty, rhymey, rhythm in order to be great.